very nice
the only thing i didnt like was the begining. you should try taking the begining and exporting that alone (the chorus or whatever) then blend it together and make it smooth sounding and then import it back into fl (i presume?) and use the newly modified mp3 instead of the actual patern you used. as for the program you use to make it smooth, there are many possibilites, but i would suggest audacity.
anyway, thanx for your vote and review! you are overall very talented. nice work!
5/5
-Caligar